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American Psychological Association
Suzette Lee
Dr. Jeffery M. Wallmann
GEN/200
February 17, 2010




For more than 100 years, the American Psychological Association (APA) has represented psychology in the United States. Based in Washington, DC APA has more than 145,000 members, making it the largest association of psychologists worldwide. The mission of the APA is to advance the creation, communication and application [Check punctuation--insert a comma before "and" if the following is the last in a series of more than two ]   of psychological knowledge to benefit society and improve people‚Äôs lives. Psychologist are frequently innovators, evolving new approaches from established knowledge to meet changing needs of people...