Final Project

Final Project
Pamela Y. Campbell
February 16th, 2011
Axia College

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Good job on your Email Etiquette CheckPoint. You have a good judge of appropriate business communications. Your rewrites were good. However, email 1 is appropriate for the workplace because it creates a paper trail. Email 4 is not appropriate for the workplace because it does not promote goodwill, it is not concise and there are instances of all caps. A rewrite is necessary. Please be sure to make these corrections for the Final Project. No title page.

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Axia College Material
Appendix D

E-mail Etiquette

Read the following e-mails. For each e-mail:
      * Describe any content and formatting errors found.
      * Determine if the content is appropriate for a workplace setting. If it is, explain why. If not, identify the errors made and rewrite the e-mail, to be appropriate.

E-mail OneTo: TomSubject line: Talent ReallocationTom,This e-mail is in reference to the two employees who are going to be terminated Friday. We have determined that they are Nicole Stone and Lorenzo Torres. As we discussed yesterday, their performances are not on par with those of other employees in the accounting department; interventions with these employees have not been successful in helping them improve their performance. Let’s plan to meet with them individually in the conference room between 3:00 and 4:00 p.m.Thanks,Andrea |
    Responses to questions 1 and 2.     This is appropriate for the email, no changes is necessary. |
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E-mail FourTo: All company employeesSubject...