Week 5 Checkpoint Xcom 285

Axia College Material
Appendix D

E-mail Etiquette

Read the following e-mails. For each e-mail:
      * Describe any content and formatting errors found.
      * Determine if the content is appropriate for a workplace setting. If it is, explain why. If not, identify the errors made and rewrite the e-mail, to be appropriate.

E-mail OneTo: TomSubject line: Talent ReallocationTom,This e-mail is in reference to the two employees who are going to be terminated Friday. We have determined that they are Nicole Stone and Lorenzo Torres. As we discussed yesterday, their performances are not on par with those of other employees in the accounting department; interventions with these employees have not been successful in helping them improve their performance. Let’s plan to meet with them individually in the conference room between 3:00 and 4:00 p.m.Thanks,Andrea |
    Responses to questions 1 and 2.   * I found no content or formatting errors.   * The content is appropriate for the workplace setting because everything in the email is business related and the author is very professional about everything |
Rewrite e-mail if necessaryE-mail OneTo:   Subject line:   |

E-mail TwoTo: ManagerSubject line: doc u wantedDear Manager,Attached to this e-mail is the doc you wanted with the info on that lake project. I hope everything in it is str8 and the way U want it!!!!   BTW, did you see Last Comic Standing last night? I was totally ROFL at the bald dude!! :-}B Cool,Employee X |
Responses to questions 1 and 2   * The content errors I found are all the abbreviations and slang that the author uses.   * This email is not appropriate for the workplace setting because the author uses slang and abbreviations in the email, which is not professional. |
Rewrite e-mail if necessaryE-mail TwoTo:   ManagerSubject line:   Document you requestedDear Manager,Attached to this email is the document you requested with the information on the lake project. I hope that everything in...