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Preliminary Thesis

The child beauty pageant only teaches children growing up being self-conscious of their body image, increase the number of sex offenders, and lead parents to abuse their parental right.

Original passage

Sometimes there are flash points in a culture that signal that children are in danger. This seems to have been the case during the blitz of media coverage following the brutal murder at home of six-year old Jon Benet Ramsey on December 26,1996.

Henry A. Giroux         Child beauty pageant: A scene from the “other America”

Paraphrase
In 1996, the violent execution of JonBenet Ramsey has been exposed by media. This has turned the public spotlight that children’s safety is at risk.

Preliminary thesis
The child beauty pageant only teaches children growing up being self- conscious of their body image, increase the number of sex offenders, and lead parents to abuse their parental right.

Original passage
Some parents often respond to criticisms of child abuse by claiming that their kids are doing exactly what they want to do and that they enjoy being in the pageants.

Henry A. Giroux       Child beauty pageant: A scene from the “other America”
Paraphrase
As to respond to the criticisms of child exploitation, a number of parents retorts it by declaring that their children acknowledge of their action and feel pleasured by entering the competition.
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Preliminary Thesis

The child beauty pageant only teaches children growing up being self-conscious of their body image, increase the number of sex offenders, and lead parents to abuse their parental right.

Original passage
Many individuals only believe that beauty pageant are for those who are breathtaking beautiful and skinny. Perhaps, this is due part to the fashion industry and many beauty pageant judges. Although your teen can participate in a beauty pageant if she wants to, no matter what her appearance is, it is something that you may...